tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1386644788533482009.post4634767990874032333..comments2023-05-02T07:49:37.768-04:00Comments on The B Side: Unorthodox and Okay With It.: The Bard: Track 1 (Preview)Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11893709002020127219noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1386644788533482009.post-80881227606826747202013-04-13T16:52:38.022-04:002013-04-13T16:52:38.022-04:00+Rayona Tuneelo About the Ed, detective, etc-- I&#...+Rayona Tuneelo About the Ed, detective, etc-- I've heard that before! Fortunately, people tend to enjoy how it changes up the vocabulary throughout the course of my books and it grows on them! So it's one of those hit or miss things. Thank you so much for your input Rayona, as usual! Email me or contact me on Google+ if you'd like to BETA read some other chapters. <br /><br />- B Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11893709002020127219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1386644788533482009.post-29752382126453690392013-04-09T13:22:00.364-04:002013-04-09T13:22:00.364-04:00Well if this is your weakest chapter then I'm ...Well if this is your weakest chapter then I'm sure that The Bard will become a bestseller! It is a fantastic start. I am drawn to Ed and his sarcastic nature. Although I found myself strongly disliking him towards the middle of the chapter, the ending was a shock and I feel sorry for him. I agree with you in that you can't have too much excitement in the first chapter and I think you have laid the foundation really well. Also, great choice of song:)Only one thing, that probably only concerns me, is the constant shift from 'Ed' to 'Edison Locard' to Locard' to 'Detective Locard'. It distracted the flow for me a little bit, but I am no expert! Anyway a great first chapter of what I am sure will be a fantastic thriller:) xAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com